7 Deadly Sins Conclusions

For the 7 Deadly Sins paper, my conclusion was pretty bad and it definitely needs some fixing up. We read a packet that explained how to write a good conclusion and tips or techniques to do so. For my first new conclusion, I decided to try to recommend the reader with a course of action. In the packet we read, it explained how this was a good idea if you wanted to explain and restate your thesis or give a moral to your story.
This story is one that teaches us a big lesson, no matter who you are, big or small, strong or weak, you are subject to the 7 deadly sins. Most of us think that we are immune to these sins but no one really is. Remember this next time your in the mall, or out with your friends, or even at home. You are never immune to these sins! So be careful and think about what you're doing.
The next conclusion that I decided to try was through using a quotation. Through the use of quotations, one can use the words of other people and them expand on them through your own words to reinforce your idea.
Men were not intended to work with the accuracy of tools, to be precise and perfect in all their actions. -John Ruskin
This quote simply displays only one hard to understand truth. No one is perfect no matter how much they think they are. There will always be those who are jealous, envious, and even lustful. No one can avoid the 7 deadly sins no matter how high they think of themselves and no matter how hard they try. As proven in the "7 Deadly Sins Committed at a Church Bake Sale" and in this paper, it is literally impossible to avoid these sins.